The disadvantages of being left-handed
Being a right-handed person, I cannot imagine that if I become left-handed someday. There must have lots of disadvantages. First of all, I can't enjoy my meal because I don't know how to use spoon or fork by using my left hand. Second people would feel confused or even ridiculous when they see my handwriting which is written by the left hand. Lastly, I will feel I'm handicapped because I am not able to control everything with my left hand. Therefore, being left-handed must bring many disadvantages for me.
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ReplyDeletecoherence:5
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mechanics of writing:4/5
Even if its not much writing it is good, actually not far from perfect. Good use of transition signals. Just missed a komma after "Second".
unity:5
ReplyDeletecoherence:5
support:5
mechanics of writing:4
As he mentioned, you should add "."
Unity: 5
ReplyDeleteCoherence: 5
Support: 5
Mechanics of writing 4
Maybe you should give more examples why the left handed has a disadvantages
Unity: 5.0
ReplyDeleteCoherence: 5.0
Transition signals: 5.0 (A comma is missing after "Second")
Note: I agree with my classmates about give more examples.