Monday, October 11, 2010

how to mend a broken heart- ellsie

How to Mend a Broken Heart
Have you ever been heart-broken? It feels really hurt and suck, right? However, as time goes by, sorrow will be erased eventually; but, how? There are three ways to mend a broken heart.
First, have new hobbies. Making new hobbies can help to shift the focus on things that bother you a lot. As you start a new hobby, you will put all your attention and interests on it and you will have no time to think about the bad things which worry you.
Second, look for family and friends’ company. Whenever you are sad, family and friends are always there for you. They will listen to your complaints about bad feelings and give you suggestion to overcome the problem you have.
Lastly, travel alone. To be alone may be lonely but it is a good timing and chance to calm down and ponder. Travel also helps you to relax yourself. During the travel, forget about everything that made you upset, just enjoy your trip and think of nothing. That will release your bad feelings and pressure.
Even though it is a hard work and also takes time to take sorrow away, as long as you follow these tips: 1. to discover new hobbies. 2. to search for family and friends’ help. 3. to travel alone. you will find out it is not that difficult to mend a broken heart and get rid of bad feelings.

1 comment:

  1. Unity: 5.0
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    Transition signals: 4.5 (You could use more transition signals)
    Thesis statement: 5.0
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